EARTHQUAKES

 This means damaging buildings 1.5 goes between 1 and 2.

What is the impact of earthquakes?

researching the impact of volcanoes

Today me Vaiola and Hiria did this all by our selves and it was fun.

Autum

 For writing Summer was nearly ending and now autumn has just begin. Now autumn is coming the leaves start to fall down to the morning dew on the grass. In a far away school there was a boy named jacob who was riding his bright Kowhai bike to pick up his friend named James. “Summer has ended” said Jacob “Yeah and now we have autumn” replied James They continued to walk to school suddenly Jacob push his bike and James fall down to the ground that it was really hurtful, that his knee was bleeding that he really need help Jacob was trying to help his friend but he just felt guilty of himself that he hurt his own friend. So a car stop by and helped James get up and gave him a plaster . “Sorry James” Jacob Resopnly said “It okay Jacob” James Replied They finally went inside school and was really happy that they straight away went to class before they were late ! Bonjour ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today Me and Vaiola made this short narrative writing ! This is mainly about autumn leaves. Comment down below !

Weather is made

The different conditions for the weather

Walking narrative

Brainstorm of ideas -  friends, walking, bush,  mud, wet dew Describing character/setting -  going for a walk to the bush, bags, bright kowhai t shirt, pink mawhero t shirt, Ideas for the problem -  Got hurt, fall down, took for ages, winning, arguing, Ideas for the solution -  Happy, excited, played, talk , stop arguing,

Start here: On a chilled relaxing saturday  morning Jack and James
went for a cool relaxing bush walk out in the woods .

When they were walking  they got see the beautiful mother nature
with amazing it amazing creature shroud by the bright seaweed green
when they were walking they could explore more out in the nature, that
they were having so much fun on that relaxing day.

Meanwhile James went off by himself of to a  bush farway from Jack
that he was hiding than he fall down and hurt himself. Now he was
stuck because he couldn't find his way  out so Jack went to look for him,
when he was looking for him but he couldn’t find him so he look at
every bush but he could still look for him so he said to himself
“where are you james” he yelled  James heard him and said “here
in the end of the bushes”

So Jake ran to him and found him, they both went back home and were
happy to see each other that they had a wonderful morning and
adventure looking  at the creatures that it was a great exploring.

Dialogue

Focuses for writing this week	Explanation in my own words.
Where do speech marks go	In the start of your conversation and at the end of you sentences.
How to put in other punctuation	? they go in the inside and any punctuations
When to start a new line or when to keep writing	When two or more people are talking if it is only one person talking you just keep talking.
Different words for ‘said’	Replied, asked, respond, politely, yel, shouted, mumbed, gutted, thought, whispe red, gaspard,
Adding adverbs	Respond politely, cried sadly, asked politely, screamed angry

EXAMPLES

“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.

“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.

“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend”
asked Dwyane.

“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.

Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits.
She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.

“Why do you want to go” mum replied.

“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.

“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.

Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”.
She had walked a loooong way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to
grandma’s house kept her going.

MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.

“Hi Vaiola how was your day?’’said Hope“Amazing,
how was your day Syariah-lee?” Asked Vaiola

“My day was great, thank you for asking”
Replied syraiahlee

“What are you doing today Hope” Asked syraiahlee

“OOHH I am really busy because I need to go school
then after school I need to go to the gym and then I
need to look after my baby sister.
How about you Vaiola?”

“Its good but really it busy because we have to go to
school then we have to walked back home which is

’real far’. Hope what time do you go to the gym?”

“KNOW!! because I have to leave at 10:40 cause it
starts at 11:00”

Put a ring around it.

No escape

Postcards in space.

South by the Southern cross

Twinkle twinkle star colours

WALT write detailed description of setting and characters.

introduction fairy tail

Once upon a time
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
One sad dreary day



In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town


There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Guards
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief
Who was Lost
Who was Enormously rich
Who was Poor
Who was a Diva
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye

One sunny day on a far far away home  there was this pretty girl named Emma she was the only child and she was spoiled by her parents.

The dads name was lasiti and the mums name was silena they had a moneyed family and there little family lived in a castle and there little family had a funny family. 

Fire house

Title: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative

Labels: writing

House on fire

Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming

Put the fire out with water hoses

 

https

Smoke is strong

Problem - there might be people inside?!

PS4 is still inside. - valuables

Clothes are inside.

Might be cats or dogs inside

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.

Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly
hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.

Title	Fire in the house
Introduction	One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Orientation	Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigsty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Problem	Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Solution	Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
Conclusion	The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

seasons

THE FULL MOON

The full moon

The full moon is in the violet blue sky with all the stars shine
bright down to the cold freezing river as it reflect upon.

The full moon is a white bright moon just like some peoples
white teeth.

The full moon is the last one to happen in the night time.Full moon
is a enormous large circle of grey hard iron.

The full moon is like the light in your room but just whiter,
brighter and lighter.

The full moons bright light is shiny through the blue cold
freezing water in the river.

The trees  are full with dead green leaves as it float down to the
violet river as it’s waves swishing through the soil upon the grass.

The Clouds are Long and bright Like some of the white Candy floss.

Some Clouds Can be Short and long some can be

Fluffy and Bright.

Most Clouds can be large and some clouds can look

Like other stuff like a cat or a dog .

THE SUN

This video is of the sun.

INQUIRY.

science words

1. Scattered throw in various random directions.

2. Probe through investigation into a crime or other matter.

3. Dirty snowballs the comet are sometime called dirty snowballs because they are made out of lumpy dust and ice.

4 Investigate carry out a careful or formal inquiry or discover and inspect the facts of ( an mistake that has gone wrong, hint , etc stand for etcetera.) so as to establish the truth. 

5. Gravity is when there is no oxygen in space or anywhere else.



We have learnt a lot of sciency words and I really enjoyed doing it.

SEASONS

SEASONS

Energy efficiency.

What are Star?

what are the planets

POLLUTION

What do you now about pollution? Pollution is when our world is a mess because people put rubbish on the ground and it starts flying around our world then it goes into the water and the sea animals think that that is there food to eat well we don’t want our animals to die. Did you know Air is dirty to?
Air is dirty because when you are doing your job dust goes up into the air and you can get hayfever from that and when you open your mouth to talk or to yorn or something it goes into you mouth then you get sick . Did you know that water can be dirty too? The dirty water goes into this pipe that has
lots of water rushing through it. We have to stop throwing our rubbish on the grown that is what
causes pollution. . This describes our planet telling us no more pollution..
 This describes the dirty water pipe with the dirty water...
 This describes the dirty Air with the dust….

what is the sun and what does it do

Shared writitng.

Title: sunlight on the earth

Paragraph: what is the sun?

• Star
• Does not move
• Surrounded by 8 planets
• Part of the solar system
• Small - big

Paragraph 2: What its made of?

• 99.87% Hg
• Core is the hottest part of the sun
• Its hot
• Energy

Paragraph 3: What does the sun do?

• Compass
• Shadow
• West
• Egyptian
• Sunflowers know where the sun is
• Total darkness
• 8 minutes -
  
  
  The Sun!
  The sun other name is sol
  
  
  What is the sun?
  The sun is a star that is part of our solar system. The sun sits at the centre of the solar system, it is orbited by 8 planets which rotate at the same time. The sun is the biggest part of our solar system, but it’s small compared to other suns in other systems. The sun does not move because it’s a star.
  
  
  
  What is the sun made of?
  The sun is made of energy. The sun produces energy, called solar energy which can be used to power homes on Earth. The core is the hottest part of the sun, it is 27 million degrees F*/15 million degrees C*. It’s made of Hydrogen gas which is sometimes known as Hg.
  
  
  What does the sun do?
  The sun produces light and warmth.It takes 8 minutes for the solar energy go from to the sun to Earth so people on earth get power in their house. The sun does also the planets use light from the sun for photosynthesis, creating food,animals and oxygen for people to breathe. If the sun didn’t exist the whole solar system would be total darkness.This property of facing the sun is mostly observed in young flowerheads and generally stops once the flower starts to bloom mature sunflowers generally face east. The other name for sun is sol.
  
  
  Conclusion
  The sun produces light and heat and the sun is a big giant star produces light and warmth

All about pollution

What do you now about pollution? Pollution is when our world is a mess because people put rubbish on the ground and it starts flying around our world then it goes into the water and the sea animals think that that is there food to eat well we don’t want our animals to die. Did you know Air is dirty to? Air is dirty because when you are doing your job dust goes up into the air and you can get hayfever from that and when you open your mouth to talk or to yorn or something it goes into you mouth then you get sick . Did you know that water can be dirty too? The dirty water goes into this pipe that has lots of water rushing through it. We have to stop throwing our rubbish on the grown that is what causes pollution. . This describes our planet telling us no more pollution.. This describes the dirty water pipe with the dirty water... This describes the dirty Air with the dust….

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This describes our planet telling us no more pollution..

This describes the dirty water pipe with the dirty water...

This describes the dirty Air with the dust….

Time word problems for kids

 we were learning about time word problems for kids it is fun we shall learn more.

Shared writing

Water cycle

 This is our work that we have done in the week so I have learned a lot of things this week. 

Bean Boozled

Today in Rm 7 in the morning on thursday 12th of april 2018 we did the bean boozled challenge. What  we did first is my teacher miss Ashley showed us then was talking about it and she said that miss Kormor brought it for her fro christmas. After that miss ashley called up students from our class room 7 and it took for long for it to be my turn. Finally it's my turn when I went up I got coconut I hated coconut so then I chewed on it and then I spat it into the bin then I ran outside then I started jumping on the spot then my teacher wrote this on her laptop and casted it onto the T.Vand she wrote that coconut was a good one but she spat it out anyway.


Later on we had a second round it went keru this boy in my class rm at tamaki primary and then it went these other boys in my class then it went on and on and on then it was my turn I actually got the same one and it was coconut I really hate coconut then I spat it out again then I went to my water bottle and then the taste went away out of my mouth.After that it was my teachers turn and she got grass and she spat it out.The second round we did it she got carmel popcorn and she was so lucky We did this for fun.

Story clean up.

Crossing the bridge

On Saturday the 16th of March 1852, there was a farmer and her brown and white cow. The farmer’s name was
called Peaches.They were on their farm in Auckland they decided to sale all there milk by a market.

First the farmer Peaches got her cow and tried to get the cow to move “ come on Bessie.” She said as she was
struggling to pull bessie. Peaches grabbed her coins and she went to William Johnsen the toll keeper. She gave
william johnson 1 coin for her and 1 for her cow.

“Evening Johnson” she said as she was waiting to cross the bridge”.

William Johnson took the money and said “thank you very much,enjoy your day.” William Johnson used his
strength to turn the winch”. That the farmer could go through the bridge and go to the market. The farmer and the
cow got to the market . The farmer got the bucket and milked the cow like it was cleaning the cow, to sell the milk
to the villagers.

The farmer looked and looked to see if anyone was coming to get some milk. But then she saw one person in
line to see if it tasted nice. So she gave the nice lady some milk and she said “ .WOOP.”!!!, that's the best milk
i've ever tasted.” So she bought some milk” Then took it to her kids and they shared the milk together. After she left
she told everyone about the milk and there was a whole line of people waiting to get some milk. Then he got to the
last person and there was no one else in the line. So she packed up all her stuff and took her cow home. Then they
got home and they jumped straight on to their beds and went to sleep.

Recount checklist ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
Surface features	Searched	Found	Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence	✓	✓	✓
Capital ‘I’	✓	NO
Capital letters for names of places and people	✓	✓	✓
Full stops at the end of a sentence	✓	✓	✓
Speech marks when people are talking	✓	✓	✓
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘	✓	✓
Words are written in past tense	✓	✓
Connectives - next, then, afterwards	✓	✓
Interesting and difficult adjectives	✓	✓
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how	✓	✓
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt	✓	✓
Ideas/events in the right order	✓	✓
3 paragraphs	✓	✓
Metaphors and similes	✓	✓	✓
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex	✓	✓

This is what we are doing for our writing we are cleaning up recounts that don't have

things that it is suppose to have in that story that they are doing.