Walking narrative

Brainstorm of ideas -  friends, walking, bush,  mud, wet dew Describing character/setting -  going for a walk to the bush, bags, bright kowhai t shirt, pink mawhero t shirt, Ideas for the problem -  Got hurt, fall down, took for ages, winning, arguing, Ideas for the solution -  Happy, excited, played, talk , stop arguing,

Start here: On a chilled relaxing saturday  morning Jack and James
went for a cool relaxing bush walk out in the woods .

When they were walking  they got see the beautiful mother nature
with amazing it amazing creature shroud by the bright seaweed green
when they were walking they could explore more out in the nature, that
they were having so much fun on that relaxing day.

Meanwhile James went off by himself of to a  bush farway from Jack
that he was hiding than he fall down and hurt himself. Now he was
stuck because he couldn't find his way  out so Jack went to look for him,
when he was looking for him but he couldn’t find him so he look at
every bush but he could still look for him so he said to himself
“where are you james” he yelled  James heard him and said “here
in the end of the bushes”

So Jake ran to him and found him, they both went back home and were
happy to see each other that they had a wonderful morning and
adventure looking  at the creatures that it was a great exploring.