Wednesday, September 21, 2016

THE HIGH ROPE

it was a glorious day. with  pink clouds and the sun coming out. once there was three boy's. the oldest brother was jake the second oldest was bake and the last one was fake. they all were doing high rope's and they were all afraid and nervous. They were swinging and swinging until  the high rope snapped.


They couldn't get past and they were yelling for help they said help help help!!!. and after that someone came to help them.

and finally they got past safely and when they got home they all had a hot chocalate.


4 comments:

  1. I like your paragraph

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  2. Hope.T,I love how you used describing words in your story,I love how you put paragraphs in your story!!Keep it up!!!

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  3. Hope T that is so wonderful keep it up hope T

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  4. Hope T that is so wonderful keep it up hope T

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