Bean Boozled

Today in Rm 7 in the morning on thursday 12th of april 2018 we did the bean boozled challenge. What  we did first is my teacher miss Ashley showed us then was talking about it and she said that miss Kormor brought it for her fro christmas. After that miss ashley called up students from our class room 7 and it took for long for it to be my turn. Finally it's my turn when I went up I got coconut I hated coconut so then I chewed on it and then I spat it into the bin then I ran outside then I started jumping on the spot then my teacher wrote this on her laptop and casted it onto the T.Vand she wrote that coconut was a good one but she spat it out anyway.


Later on we had a second round it went keru this boy in my class rm at tamaki primary and then it went these other boys in my class then it went on and on and on then it was my turn I actually got the same one and it was coconut I really hate coconut then I spat it out again then I went to my water bottle and then the taste went away out of my mouth.After that it was my teachers turn and she got grass and she spat it out.The second round we did it she got carmel popcorn and she was so lucky We did this for fun.

Story clean up.

Crossing the bridge

On Saturday the 16th of March 1852, there was a farmer and her brown and white cow. The farmer’s name was
called Peaches.They were on their farm in Auckland they decided to sale all there milk by a market.

First the farmer Peaches got her cow and tried to get the cow to move “ come on Bessie.” She said as she was
struggling to pull bessie. Peaches grabbed her coins and she went to William Johnsen the toll keeper. She gave
william johnson 1 coin for her and 1 for her cow.

“Evening Johnson” she said as she was waiting to cross the bridge”.

William Johnson took the money and said “thank you very much,enjoy your day.” William Johnson used his
strength to turn the winch”. That the farmer could go through the bridge and go to the market. The farmer and the
cow got to the market . The farmer got the bucket and milked the cow like it was cleaning the cow, to sell the milk
to the villagers.

The farmer looked and looked to see if anyone was coming to get some milk. But then she saw one person in
line to see if it tasted nice. So she gave the nice lady some milk and she said “ .WOOP.”!!!, that's the best milk
i've ever tasted.” So she bought some milk” Then took it to her kids and they shared the milk together. After she left
she told everyone about the milk and there was a whole line of people waiting to get some milk. Then he got to the
last person and there was no one else in the line. So she packed up all her stuff and took her cow home. Then they
got home and they jumped straight on to their beds and went to sleep.

Recount checklist ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
Surface features	Searched	Found	Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence	✓	✓	✓
Capital ‘I’	✓	NO
Capital letters for names of places and people	✓	✓	✓
Full stops at the end of a sentence	✓	✓	✓
Speech marks when people are talking	✓	✓	✓
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘	✓	✓
Words are written in past tense	✓	✓
Connectives - next, then, afterwards	✓	✓
Interesting and difficult adjectives	✓	✓
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how	✓	✓
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt	✓	✓
Ideas/events in the right order	✓	✓
3 paragraphs	✓	✓
Metaphors and similes	✓	✓	✓
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex	✓	✓

This is what we are doing for our writing we are cleaning up recounts that don't have

things that it is suppose to have in that story that they are doing.