EARTHQUAKES

 This means damaging buildings 1.5 goes between 1 and 2.

What is the impact of earthquakes?

researching the impact of volcanoes

Today me Vaiola and Hiria did this all by our selves and it was fun.

Autum

 For writing Summer was nearly ending and now autumn has just begin. Now autumn is coming the leaves start to fall down to the morning dew on the grass. In a far away school there was a boy named jacob who was riding his bright Kowhai bike to pick up his friend named James. “Summer has ended” said Jacob “Yeah and now we have autumn” replied James They continued to walk to school suddenly Jacob push his bike and James fall down to the ground that it was really hurtful, that his knee was bleeding that he really need help Jacob was trying to help his friend but he just felt guilty of himself that he hurt his own friend. So a car stop by and helped James get up and gave him a plaster . “Sorry James” Jacob Resopnly said “It okay Jacob” James Replied They finally went inside school and was really happy that they straight away went to class before they were late ! Bonjour ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today Me and Vaiola made this short narrative writing ! This is mainly about autumn leaves. Comment down below !

Weather is made

The different conditions for the weather

Walking narrative

Brainstorm of ideas -  friends, walking, bush,  mud, wet dew Describing character/setting -  going for a walk to the bush, bags, bright kowhai t shirt, pink mawhero t shirt, Ideas for the problem -  Got hurt, fall down, took for ages, winning, arguing, Ideas for the solution -  Happy, excited, played, talk , stop arguing,

Start here: On a chilled relaxing saturday  morning Jack and James
went for a cool relaxing bush walk out in the woods .

When they were walking  they got see the beautiful mother nature
with amazing it amazing creature shroud by the bright seaweed green
when they were walking they could explore more out in the nature, that
they were having so much fun on that relaxing day.

Meanwhile James went off by himself of to a  bush farway from Jack
that he was hiding than he fall down and hurt himself. Now he was
stuck because he couldn't find his way  out so Jack went to look for him,
when he was looking for him but he couldn’t find him so he look at
every bush but he could still look for him so he said to himself
“where are you james” he yelled  James heard him and said “here
in the end of the bushes”

So Jake ran to him and found him, they both went back home and were
happy to see each other that they had a wonderful morning and
adventure looking  at the creatures that it was a great exploring.

Dialogue

Focuses for writing this week	Explanation in my own words.
Where do speech marks go	In the start of your conversation and at the end of you sentences.
How to put in other punctuation	? they go in the inside and any punctuations
When to start a new line or when to keep writing	When two or more people are talking if it is only one person talking you just keep talking.
Different words for ‘said’	Replied, asked, respond, politely, yel, shouted, mumbed, gutted, thought, whispe red, gaspard,
Adding adverbs	Respond politely, cried sadly, asked politely, screamed angry

EXAMPLES

“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.

“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.

“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend”
asked Dwyane.

“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.

Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits.
She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.

“Why do you want to go” mum replied.

“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.

“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.

Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”.
She had walked a loooong way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to
grandma’s house kept her going.

MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.

“Hi Vaiola how was your day?’’said Hope“Amazing,
how was your day Syariah-lee?” Asked Vaiola

“My day was great, thank you for asking”
Replied syraiahlee

“What are you doing today Hope” Asked syraiahlee

“OOHH I am really busy because I need to go school
then after school I need to go to the gym and then I
need to look after my baby sister.
How about you Vaiola?”

“Its good but really it busy because we have to go to
school then we have to walked back home which is

’real far’. Hope what time do you go to the gym?”

“KNOW!! because I have to leave at 10:40 cause it
starts at 11:00”

Put a ring around it.

No escape

Postcards in space.

South by the Southern cross

Twinkle twinkle star colours

WALT write detailed description of setting and characters.

introduction fairy tail

Once upon a time
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
One sad dreary day



In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town


There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Guards
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief
Who was Lost
Who was Enormously rich
Who was Poor
Who was a Diva
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye

One sunny day on a far far away home  there was this pretty girl named Emma she was the only child and she was spoiled by her parents.

The dads name was lasiti and the mums name was silena they had a moneyed family and there little family lived in a castle and there little family had a funny family. 

Fire house

Title: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative

Labels: writing

House on fire

Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming

Put the fire out with water hoses

 

https

Smoke is strong

Problem - there might be people inside?!

PS4 is still inside. - valuables

Clothes are inside.

Might be cats or dogs inside

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.

Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly
hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.

Title	Fire in the house
Introduction	One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Orientation	Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigsty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Problem	Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Solution	Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
Conclusion	The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

seasons

THE FULL MOON

The full moon

The full moon is in the violet blue sky with all the stars shine
bright down to the cold freezing river as it reflect upon.

The full moon is a white bright moon just like some peoples
white teeth.

The full moon is the last one to happen in the night time.Full moon
is a enormous large circle of grey hard iron.

The full moon is like the light in your room but just whiter,
brighter and lighter.

The full moons bright light is shiny through the blue cold
freezing water in the river.

The trees  are full with dead green leaves as it float down to the
violet river as it’s waves swishing through the soil upon the grass.

The Clouds are Long and bright Like some of the white Candy floss.

Some Clouds Can be Short and long some can be

Fluffy and Bright.

Most Clouds can be large and some clouds can look

Like other stuff like a cat or a dog .

THE SUN

This video is of the sun.

INQUIRY.